- When Luigi's says "mustache," he means "must ask." (I must ask (mustache) you a question). You probably heard of this one before
- Y'know how you're pruney after staying in the water for a long time, like pruney fingers? And also how peaches can get wrinkly like a prune? ...That's kinda what the Peach pun is about :0
- Mario Kart ==> Wario Fart... I just changed two letters xD The 'Paperless Mario' part was based from the Paper Mario series.
Anyways, hope this was easy enough to understand XD Making a second set of puns was harder though, but not too bad
The first set of Mario puns: gabasonian.deviantart.com/art/…
Me: I think you should shave it for later, Luigi
Credit where it's due though, at least this piece is rather self-aware. You warned us of bad, perhaps real dumb puns and we sure got 'em. Believe me, on a personal note, I've heard these plays on words that can only make you groan.
The good style of drawing is what saves this though; simple, cute and serves a good purpose. Each character looks very much like their game counterparts (although maybe Wario could gain a bit more weight), and the overflow effects of the bath look all right too. Not a bad effort, pal. You've gone out to give us some entertainment, and I believe you've delivered in your own way.
And it's not really a full-fledged "critique" either, just some general thoughts and a general rating, in my opinion, on how good the work is. 3 out of 5 isn't prime, but it's decent.
I'd feel I'd have to be a lot harsher when handing out a DA critique because I have to consider everything like impact, originality, vision and technique, which based on some areas, would really drag the score down. I don't want that when I hand out a rating.
In the end, it's one man's opinion. Any artist can contact me (after I give their work the nod) and request that I leave the rating out, no problem.
Have a good one!
Luigi: I MUSTACHE you a question!
Me: Eh, SHAVE it for later.